Score: 10

"Great Flow!"

submission: ~EnV~Heaven Rd. 3

date: June 29, 2008

This song has so much packed into it, the complexity is mind blowing. I love the transitions, they're done perfectly. The atmosphere is just amazing, it's like I can almost see the music. The two best parts are at 1:02 and at 1:57. I showed this to my brother and he went "whoa..." when the melody kicked in at 1:02, and he doesn't like electronica at all. The piano part with the cheering literally gives me goosebumps every time :D Love it!

Score: 8

"Could be great"

submission: Countdown to awesome

date: June 25, 2008

But it has some issues...

First the good:

I love the main synth part. It's very energetic and it's very dynamic in range. (That's two different tracks right?) You used good roots in the chord. Well good job on making the high notes louder, harder, and giving them more of an echo. Makes them stand out.

You have a good rhythm going on, and and I like the glitching towards the end. That is well done. Has sort of an industrial feel.

I've been keeping this looping, it's addicting (a bit harsh through headphones though) Makes me feel happy :)

The bad:

I like the gameboy-ish synth that starts at :45. The notes are kind of flat though. That's fine, but when you include the main synths into the melody at :49 it creates a lot of dissonance. Those notes are not flat, and if anything, sharp. Sorry, but :49 - 1:11 is sort of a mess :/ Also, you need to make sure the notes you're using are in the right key (not sure if they are) It would have been pretty good if you'd just left the main synth out at that section; It would have been a little empty though, which brings me to my next point. The mixing needs a lot of work. I've noticed with your songs that there's hardly any bass or drums at all. It really needs a force to drive this song, and I think it would be possible to remix this into a badass drum and bass song :P There's a bit too much empty space between the notes, you have one pad (i think), but I would use one or two more. Also you should make this stereo, instead of everything being balanced between the two speakers.

Wow, it looks like I hated it by the amount I wrote under "bad" compared to the amount I wrote under "good". But I'm just better at making constructive criticism than praise, makes some people think I'm rude lol. But I really did like it. I gave you an 8 because I think it has a lot of originality. And I think you have the potential, you just don't put enough time and effort into it. (You really should! have more patience!) >:C I think you had a good idea here... Could I try remixing this sometime? (not a promise that I will though)

Score: 10

"Absolutely love it."

submission: -Emotion Burst locomotion-

date: June 3, 2008

I heard this in Drift and I pretty much only played this track instead of the other one. I think kbaum was really smart for picking this, it sounds very aquatic :3 Perfect fish music XD I like how it's sort of a fusion of genres.

Score: 10

"This needs to be an hour, not 10 minutes XD"

submission: More Than Words (OriginalMix)

date: May 25, 2008

I love this song, when I listen to it I really space out and totally loose track of time, the song flows so smoothly and never gets boring. It's so relaxing :)

Score: 8

"Nice rythm"

submission: API - Fabricate

date: May 21, 2008

I like the complexity of the rythm here... it sounds pretty random but it makes sense. I don't really the pause at :14 though... it bugs me and sorta messes up the flow. You should make it longer, I'd like to hear it with more melody too.

Score: 10

"Amazing."

submission: 6 in a Row

date: September 4, 2007

This song is pure win. I vote 5 on it every day.

Score: 8

"Very Nice"

submission: In The Sunset

date: July 7, 2007

Overall, the piece was very good, especially considering your age. It was a tiny bit iritating though. I may be the only one to notice this, but your rythm is a little bit off. It's only slightly noticable at the beginning with the high notes. I think that there should be more of a variety with the drums also. Also, you should make a looped version without the fadeout.